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		<title>Chartermarque</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Pensions : Wealth Management : Financial Planning : Tax]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Pensions : Wealth Management : Financial Planning : Tax</p>
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		<title>Enhance People Consultants update</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Jun 2010 17:53:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[HR, Management Consultancy and Training in Scotland and throughout the UK.]]></description>
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		<title>St Mungo&#8217;s Balerno</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Jun 2010 17:50:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[St Mungo&#8217;s Church Balerno, Edinburgh.]]></description>
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		<title>Live at SNH</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 27 May 2010 09:43:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Want to know more about volcanoes (ancient Scottish ones, that is) not the current Iclandic eruption)?  Trying to find a Local Nature Reserve to visit? Interested in climate change? The new Scottish Natural Heritage website is live and burgeoning with interesting, relevant information. Cygnus Extra provided training for staff writing for the project and contributed [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Want to know more about volcanoes (ancient Scottish ones, that is) not the current Iclandic eruption)?  Trying to find a Local Nature Reserve to visit? Interested in climate change?</p>
<p>The new<a href="http://www.snh.gov.uk/" target="_blank"> Scottish Natural Heritage</a> website is live and burgeoning with interesting, relevant information.</p>
<p>Cygnus Extra provided training for staff writing for the project and contributed to editorial work for the site.</p>
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		<title>Big splash for re-launch of Clyde Waterfront website</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 27 May 2010 09:36:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[We&#8217;ve been working with Innovation Digital on the Clyde Waterfront website since 2006 and it has been great to see this young website grow up and become a vital channel for the regeneration that is taking place along the river. Now the site has been re-launched with some great new functionality and plenty of exciting [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>We&#8217;ve been working with Innovation Digital on the Clyde Waterfront website since 2006 and it has been great to see this young website grow up and become a vital channel for the regeneration that is taking place along the river. Now the site has been re-launched with some great new functionality and plenty of exciting content.</p>
<p>Cygnus Extra contributes copywriting services for the site, including researching and maintaining a great deal of the project information that the site is well known for.</p>
<p>Visit <a href="http://www.clydewaterfront.com">www.clydewaterfront.com</a> to see what we&#8217;ve been up to.</p>
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		<title>Tone of what?</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Sep 2009 16:18:13 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>hilary</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Over many decades now, the tone of voice used in business has altered to become increasingly informal. This of course is a reflection of general trends in business life and relationships, in how people address each other, and attitudes to authority. Unless we recognise these trends and respond to them in an appropriate way our [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Over many decades now, the tone of voice used in business has altered to become increasingly informal. This of course is a reflection of general trends in business life and relationships, in how people address each other, and attitudes to authority.  Unless we recognise these trends and respond to them in an appropriate way our style will seem dated to our audiences.</p>
<p>Paula La Rocque, one of the USA’s leading writing coaches says, “Accuracy aside, simplicity, clarity and brevity are the most important criteria for all writing.” I would endorse her approach and argue that clear, simple and direct informational writing can provide the bedrock for good communications skills.</p>
<p>The definition of a “tone of voice” or a personality for the writing often starts by identifying a couple of adjectives &#8211; engaging, passionate, fresh, professional, friendly are all favourites. This is fine as far as it goes, but actually we have to go further.</p>
<p>The style or tone that we are after is also defined by register (the level of formality), word choice and syntax. In addition, the purpose of the writing, the audience and medium used for communicating, all contribute to the tone.</p>
<p>While brand guidelines often define a tone &#8211; up to a point &#8211; organisations can find this a difficult aspect of branding to implement, and sometimes progress can be haphazard.</p>
<p>The tactics for implementing tone are actually grounded back in the whole area of audience awareness. We have to be ready to have a conversation with our audience &#8211; which means there are at least two people involved.</p>
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		<title>Social Media takes over the world</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Jul 2009 13:45:57 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>hilary</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I was at a seminar in Glasgow yesterday hosted by MIN. The hot topic was Social Media and how to use it effectively for business. Some great examples from Guy at the Carphone Warehouse about how they are using Twitter to deal with customer complaints. Then there was Heather, farmer&#8217;s wife and the boss at [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://twitter.com/CygnusExtra"><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-534" style="border: 0pt none;" title="Twitter logo" src="http://cygnus-extra.co.uk/2009/wp-content/uploads/2009/07/twitter_logo_header.png" alt="Twitter logo" width="155" height="36" /></a>I was at a seminar in Glasgow yesterday hosted by MIN. The hot topic was Social Media and how to use it effectively for business.</p>
<p>Some great examples from Guy at the Carphone Warehouse about how they are using Twitter to deal with customer complaints. Then there was Heather, farmer&#8217;s wife and the boss at Wiggly Wigglers, who talked about how she turned a very small business, down a leafly lane in rural England somewhere, into rather a successful one with a bit of a cult following for their podcasts. Not to be outdone, Craig from Whyte and McKay had a great story about a treasure hunt they ran on Twitter while he was at large in the city with a bottle of Whisky in his backpack as the prize for anyone who could find him.</p>
<p>Conclusions from the day? Twitter, Facebook, Podcasting&#8230; great tools and as good as the ideas that you can come up with to use them. However, this is not sedate old fashioned marketing and not for the fainthearted. No one is very sure about the results or even about why some things work and other&#8217;s don&#8217;t. On the other hand, everyone seems convinced about the world takeover.</p>
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		<title>Really advanced stuff</title>
		<link>http://cygnus-extra.co.uk/?p=527</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Jul 2009 11:11:32 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>hilary</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[A number of recent training events are helping people to take their writing on to the next level. At Publishing Scotland we delivered a one day open advanced writing for the web training course which allowed people to practice and apply skills they&#8217;d learned on an earlier course. Delegates enjoyed the opportunity to spend time [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A number of recent training events are helping people to take their writing on to the next level.</p>
<p><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-537" title="Publishing Scotland" src="http://cygnus-extra.co.uk/2009/wp-content/uploads/2009/07/publishing_scotland_logo.gif" alt="Publishing Scotland" width="146" height="61" />At Publishing Scotland we delivered a one day open advanced writing for the web training course which allowed people to practice and apply skills they&#8217;d learned on an earlier course.  Delegates enjoyed the opportunity to spend time thinking about how they tackle different writing tasks for their own websites. One delegate even wanted to know if we&#8217;d considered running a week-long course. It may come yet!</p>
<p>Other advanced writing workshops have been delivered in house, allowing teams of writers to collaborate on specific content tasks.</p>
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		<title>Which one of your readers are you writing for?</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 29 May 2009 12:34:03 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>hilary</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Terry Wogan has at least two listeners. There&#8217;s the one whose letter he&#8217;s reading, and then there&#8217;s the &#8220;other listener&#8221;.  As a result there is an endearing intimacy about that show, even although it is the most listened-to breakfast show on the airwaves. So, when you are writing for the web, can you write for [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Terry Wogan has at least two listeners. There&#8217;s the one whose letter he&#8217;s reading, and then there&#8217;s the &#8220;other listener&#8221;.  As a result there is an endearing intimacy about that show, even although it is the most listened-to breakfast show on the airwaves.</p>
<p><img class="alignleft size-full wp-image-522" style="margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 5px;" title="Readers" src="http://cygnus-extra.co.uk/2009/wp-content/uploads/2009/05/readers.jpg" alt="Readers" width="275" height="182" />So, when you are writing for the web, can you write for that &#8220;other listener&#8221;, or in our case &#8220;other reader&#8221;? How well do you know your audience? Do you know who that person is? If you can write for an individual you may be more likely to engage all your readers.</p>
<p>This technique, when you identify an individual to write for,  is called writing for a persona. Many web copywriting techniques are borrowed from other disciplines and this one is no exception. Marketing specialists, journalists and fiction writers all use the idea of a &#8220;Persona&#8221;.</p>
<p>In my web copywriting training courses we explore more about how to write well for your audience in general and that &#8220;other reader&#8221; in particular!</p>
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		<title>We&#8217;ve joined the twittering classes</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 29 May 2009 10:28:51 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>hilary</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[For purely professional reasons, you understand, we are now part of the social networking explosion. Visit Cygnus Extra on Twitter and become a follower! That way you&#8217;ll get more regular news, people to follow and hopefully some pearls of wisdom. The great discipline on Twitter of course is to write short, something we thoroughly believe [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>For purely professional reasons, you understand, we are now part of the social networking explosion. Visit <a href="http://twitter.com/cygnusextra" target="_blank">Cygnus Extra </a>on Twitter and become a follower! That way you&#8217;ll get more regular news, people to follow and hopefully some pearls of wisdom.</p>
<p>The great discipline on Twitter of course is to write short, something we thoroughly believe in. Now we&#8217;ll have to walk the walk.</p>
<p>Look out Facebook and Bebo. We may be going there next!</p>
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